Friday, October 21, 2011

Missing

TEXT MSG

Where are you??? The police are here, and school just called. E's missing. Someone saw her talking to a man. OMG.


Write On Edge: Red-Writing-Hood


This week's assignment: compose a text–160 characters–that would either elicit or express fear. So, how did I do? Were you scaaaaaaaaaared? You know this is not true, right? Good.

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15 comments:

  1. KristinaOctober 21, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    Oh goodness. Every parent's worst fear. Made my heart pound.

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  2. Katie @ Chicken Noodle GravyOctober 21, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    That definitely would be a terrifying moment. Oh, my...

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  3. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 12:56 PM

    It would be totally terrifying.

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  4. RoxanneOctober 21, 2011 at 1:03 PM

    Oh crap, that's scary!

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  5. VenusOctober 21, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    Oh well done! I like that this has such a sense of reality to it. Definitely scary. :-)

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  6. ReneeOctober 21, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    Definitely a text to instill terror. Shudder!

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  7. Barbara @ de rebusOctober 21, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    Oh - that is a REAL fear!

    My was horror movie scary... this is real life scary!!

    Nicely done.

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  8. Galit BreenOctober 21, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    Ugh. This is a pit-in-the-stomach kind of scary.

    Just ugh.

    (Fabulous job, lady!)

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  9. Not Just Another JenniferOctober 21, 2011 at 2:57 PM

    That gets to a mom's central fear!

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  10. AnonymousOctober 21, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    OMG I would hate hate to get that text! Geez heart skipped a beat and I know it is fiction

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  11. AmandaOctober 21, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    my heart just skipped a beat!

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  12. angelaOctober 21, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    The ones about kids freak me out.

    It's a nightmare and much more scary than creaking floors (which is what I wrote about, so I'm only criticizing myself, not anyone else!)

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  13. julie mooreOctober 21, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    One of the scariest of the night for me.

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  14. RathiOctober 21, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    OMG indeed!

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  15. Jen Has A PenOctober 22, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    I didn't do this prompt, but daaaaang.... you scared the crap out of me.

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Thanks for your feedback!

~Kris

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